Monday, October 24, 2011

Journal 6

Ben Franklin's The Autobiography
1. In Franklin’s plan for self-perfection, he listed thirteen virtues that should be practiced.  Similar to an experiment, Franklin attempted to practice every virtue without fault, and when an error was made, he would take note of it in his journal.  Franklin finds that it is nearly impossible to live out the virtues without making mistakes.  Franklin eventually comes to a point where he is ready to give up, finding that perfection was not easy to obtain.  Franklin also discovers that some virtues were more difficult to master than others such as, Order, which he claims he never accomplish in old age.  Franklin comes to the conclusion that even with ambition, he could not reach his goal of perfection.  However, Franklin states that he is happy that he attempted perfection.
2. I think that a plan such as Franklin’s would improve me as a person; however, I do not believe it would make me perfect.  Franklin addressed his experiment for perfection as more difficult than he thought because he was more full of faults that he had ever imagined.  I know that I would fall very short of perfection due to my many faults.  Though, I do think that people should practice these virtues, all while understanding and accepting mistakes.  My top virtues are as follows: temperance, chastity, humility, order, and silence.

Journal 5


Paragraph 1
            The harder the conflict, the more glorious the triumph.
            Emotional and logical appeal
            How can you be sure the colonist will win?
            Faulty analogy and begging the question
Paragraph 2
            God is on the American side
Ethical Appeal
We do not really know if God is on either side or any side at all.
Begging the question – knowing what God wants
Paragraph 3
Thomas Pain is trying to get people to fight for freedom as soon as possible so they do not leave it up to their children
            Emotional, ethical, and logical appeal
            We should not fight because problems will work themselves out.
                        Things could possibly get worse
            Bandwagon – not a man lives on the continent…
                        False Dichotomy – gives two extreme options
Paragraph 4
            Argument by analogy – the kings is like a thief, so we should fight him
            Emotional Appeal
            The English are too powerful; the Americans would be overwhelmed by the Crown’s force.

Thomas Paine – Paine uses mostly emotional appeal in order to be persuasive in a passionate way.  Because he uses emotional appeal, his arguments lack logic, and it becomes easy to make counter arguments using logic.